the majority of people who fail to accumulate money sufficient for their needs, are, generally, easily influenced by the "opinions" of others. they permit the news***s and the "gossiping" neighbors to do their "thinking" for them. opinions are the cheapest commodities on earth. everyone has a flock of opinions ready to be wished upon anyone who will accept them. if you are influenced by opinions when you reach decisions, you will not succeed in any undertaking, much less in that of transmuting your own desire into money.
大多数没有积累足够财富的人通常容易受到他人意见的影响。 他们让报纸和八卦邻居自己“思考”。 意见是这个星球上最便宜的商品。 每个人都有一长串的意见要说。 如果你在做决定时受到别人意见的影响，你在任何领域都不会成功，更不用说成功地将你的欲望转化为金钱了。
结构分析。 第一句话的词干：
the majority of people...are,..influenced by...
决定性从句： .who fail to accumulate money sufficient for their needs,..
修饰大多数人;
第二句话，简单的一句话;
permit sth. to do.允许。 做。
第三句话，简单的一句话;
第四句词干：
everyone has a flock of opinions ready to be wished upon anyone...
决定性从句： .who will accept them.;
修改任何人;
第五句话的词干：，你不会在任何事业上取得成功，更不用说在......
这里指的是任何同类的事业（但不是在不同的领域）;
much less.更不用说，更不可能;
条件状语从句：
if you are influenced by "opinions"...
条件状语从句包含时间状语从句：
when you reach decisions,..